Given the subject matter and theme, it's amazing how boring this was. I feel there's no better way to make you improve other than to tell you that, but I won't leave it there. It wasn't just boring. You failed to get the proportions of their bodies correct. A man is much larger than a woman. Lara Croft is famously petite with a gymnastics background. She's highly unlikely to be larger than ANY man she encounters, but somehow, she's obviously much larger than this guy.
*Why is Lara never allowed to have an orgasm? No one ever animates her in the throes of ecstasy. Consider it a challenge for the next project. When you make a long video with a dude having three orgasms in her vagina while ignoring her ass completely, it's just odd. She enjoys anal.
I don't know much about animation and creating characters, but you clearly do. Your character design is excellent. It's clear you have the skills necessary to create great work, but your characters lack souls. Maybe I'm asking too much, but at least now you know it's being noticed.
*I can't imagine why you created a separate video almost exactly the same as this one and uploaded it like it was totally different. It wasn't.
Given the subject matter and theme, it's amazing how boring this was. I feel there's no better way to make you improve other than to tell you that, but I won't leave it there. It wasn't just boring. You failed to get the proportions of their bodies correct. A man is much larger than a woman. Lara Croft is famously petite with a gymnastics background. She's highly unlikely to be larger than ANY man she encounters, but somehow, she's obviously much larger than this guy.
*Why is Lara never allowed to have an orgasm? No one ever animates her in the throes of ecstasy. Consider it a challenge for the next project. When you make a long video with a dude having three orgasms in her vagina while ignoring her ass completely, it's just odd. She enjoys anal.
I don't know much about animation and creating characters, but you clearly do. Your character design is excellent. It's clear you have the skills necessary to create great work, but your characters lack souls. Maybe I'm asking too much, but at least now you know it's being noticed.
*I can't imagine why you created a separate video almost exactly the same as this one and uploaded it like it was totally different. It wasn't.