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WILD WIFE
4 months ago
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https://subscribestar.adult/wildntr
ALL CHARACTERS ARE 18+ AND CONTAINS NTR THEMES
IF YOU LIKE WHAT I MAKE
PLEASE CONSIDER SUPPORTING IF YOU CAN
THANK YOU...
ALL CHARACTERS ARE 18+ AND CONTAINS NTR THEMES
IF YOU LIKE WHAT I MAKE
PLEASE CONSIDER SUPPORTING IF YOU CAN
THANK YOU...
The writing would instantly improve without changing your style if you could just stop inserting the word 'Bitch' into every sentence. I would suggest reducing the chatter during sex. If lovers must say something, it should be Sexy and Inspiring. But generally, the sheer volume of chatter is out of hand - this is not quite a criticism of your writing; just the amount. Don't cover every frame with text. You're hiding the animation with bright pink text. Why would you work on the animation only to cover it up with nonsensical text that you can't possibly be proud of?
I hope you don't mind constructive criticism. Most people take it as a direct attack. It's not. Not direct anyway. Keep up the good work, and improve the rest.