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Volleyball Afterburn
3 weeks ago
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17:06
Once her primal instincts took over, Alice could no longer conceal her desire or her feelings. The shift in her energy was unmistakable—her glances lingered, her composure faltered, and the tension between them grew impossible to ignore. Tony noticed immediately; it was written all over her, clear as day.
The Full Video IS NOT on Patreon anymore i took it down for safety reasons and will soon release the full version
www.Patreon.com/madamealisa
For Sounds i used OpenNsfw Sound Pack and Elevenlabs
The Full Video IS NOT on Patreon anymore i took it down for safety reasons and will soon release the full version
www.Patreon.com/madamealisa
For Sounds i used OpenNsfw Sound Pack and Elevenlabs
What I'm saying is, you added superfluous text which couldn't even be properly read anyway because half of it was cropped out, and you arrogantly assumed your final edit was totally perfect and there was no need to give it a look just to double check to see if you made any glaringly obvious mistakes. You did.
But that's okay. Nobody's perfect. You'll see improvement as soon as you upload the next one.
Oh, I didn't mention the quality of your writing but I haven't watched the video yet. I'm still recovering from the first 1:05.