What. The. Fuck. Im not one that tries to be a dickhead but this is to be honest all over the place. The audios and the music are all over the place, and some of the artist their styles are just mediocre, so just cut them out next time but with all that said, I do see potential. We'll try again next month to see what you accomplished.
First step to getting good is sucking at it. I like the song but the videos are all over the place & don't sync well. Personally I've never been big on mixing 3D & 2D in videos as it can be a bit jarring. But keep it up, you'll improve over time!