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Hornet vs Knight SX
15 hours ago
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Hi! I created an NSFW animation where Hornet challenges the Hollow Knight to uncover the incredible inner power of the soul within his vessel. I’d really appreciate your feedback and support.
Sound design by musi_cassie.
Support me here https://www.patreon.com/sim0n404
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NSFW twitter https://twitter.com/sim0n404kek
Sound design by musi_cassie.
Support me here https://www.patreon.com/sim0n404
or here https://boosty.to/sim0n404
Main twitter https://twitter.com/Sim0n404
NSFW twitter https://twitter.com/sim0n404kek
The transition around the 47 second mark feels a bit off to me, I think mostly because the music doesn't loop seamlessly between them, watching it back muted it feels less jarring. And the second name card at the 1:10 mark is very weird feeling, it honestly took me out of it on the first watch. I can understand it being used as a way to change the BGM a little more naturally, but I think just fading the track in/out quickly and maybe having a Hornet soundclip play over the fade would've been just as fine.
I apologize if I'm coming off like an asshat, I saw you're open to feedback and figured I'd give some. Overall I really really like this animation, I'd love to see you do more HK in the future. Either way I'll be following your art from now on, keep up the great work!
Also, don't be afraid to hold on the money shot a little longer! There's hardly enough time to take it in before the video ends/loops.