Well. 3 things: 1. A lil bit of dialogue in the middle would be nice, but that one's optional. 2. Better speed of dialogue. Goes way too fast, even on x0.5 speed it's a bit to fast. 3. I get it's your first one but not having a finish scene, especially with context that final dialogue has, kinda wack
1. A lil bit of dialogue in the middle would be nice, but that one's optional.
2. Better speed of dialogue. Goes way too fast, even on x0.5 speed it's a bit to fast.
3. I get it's your first one but not having a finish scene, especially with context that final dialogue has, kinda wack
Otherwise, Good Enough™️