Lara Croft Adventures – Journey of the Tomb Raider

This looks amazing, concept is great. You can Improve on the clips choice or framing and definitely font edit, but otherwise great. I've seen a comment about clips not being long enough but honestly the timing is perfect, it's just the fact that u spend the entirety of it trying to understand what the cursive says. Keep improving!

Honestly not terrible. The Cursive is a bit hard to read but had you used a narration in the same way as GlowingLightDude does I imagine this would turn out far better.

This is why lara is the perfect role model for all girls (❤️ ω ❤️)

You should have shown longer clips than you did.
Like, you can't even enjoy one thing.Before it's already onto the next