vacation with dad - part 3

I loved every moment of this three part series. The whole concept and setting is perfect; the burly Dad and his cozy cabin next to a beautiful private lake, the bonfire and spa, outhouse, and of course the horse in the barn. The daughter is so petite compared to her Dad, innocent and loving, exploring her sexuality with him. I really enjoyed being in this world and seeing a Daddy and daughter bond in the special way that they did. I hope to see them reunite soon so we can watch them grow their special relationship. Hopefully next time there will be a gloryhole scene at the outhouse. Beautiful work!

that was great
is there next part?

The exercise class at the end was strange, and the offended customer storming out was odd, but you did good work. I absolutely HATED the music, and the constant thought bubbles. Does every inner thought need to be expressed?
Nevermind. The quality of your work is great. I found it kinda unclear when she was only daydreaming...not that that matters much. But it might be something to pay more attention to when you create your next project.