115313wang XuanYi

So my friend I loved this but it's way to long. Glad you're not afraid to show the dude because whats the point of having monster porn or a not typically attractive guy and not showing them. it bugs the shit out of me.

But after a while it just get old and I usually dont stick with it that long.

If you had cut this down to 15 minutes with some meaningful scene and a light story behind it I think it would have been perfect. I personally love the dude in this setting so taking the additional time just to have each seen hit goes far.

The thing I think bother me the most here is the none stop hour long squealing. having light lighter and then getting louder during those gasm moments makes it better. Not just screeching throughout.

Finally , a cum shot goes a long way. Even if it's just one having it show or making them appear that they are will hit so hard.

Overall I loved this so can't wait to see you evolve further.

The god of monster porn has spoken.