The Dream of Jonah 4K

There’ll be one more video before I join the army and start training soon. I probably won’t be making story-based videos with dialogues for a while — gonna keep it simple for now.

Make another part

I used the condom idea to give Jonah a reason to go into Lara’s room. Why a condom? Well, it’s my way of symbolizing his confidence and also to play around with how similar videos usually go — they often make it look like women instantly fall for guys just because of Big Black Cock But I didn’t want to repeat that cliché, so I added a reason behind it.

And yeah, it’s part of Jonah’s plan — he’s expecting it to work out perfectly, but turns out Lara’s one step ahead of him! That twist at the end was intentional.

I didn’t want to make another story where every female character just gives in easily to black cock I wanted to show that she’s smart and aware of what’s going on.

All the dialogues I wrote were just to build emotion and tension — kinda like how story-based adult comics do it. In those, it usually starts with resistance, then shifts once the emotion kicks in — she eventually gives in to the moment, which reflects how many stories tend to portray that emotional surrender. But that’s exactly the pattern I wanted to comment on.

If that kind of storytelling isn’t your thing, that’s fine — you can always go watch the usual videos where things just start and end without any setup or story.

Buffet I think Donkey was talking about Lightning, chill out ???? Also, comments show up a bit slow here.

@Donkeybonkey
Touch grass ?
Better yet, I touch your moms pubes everyday.
And it's not a dream sequence.

Hey JerryRunner. I apologize for my remarks gradually sounding more and more harsh as I kept typing, but to be fair, you said you don't mind feedback. Having said that, I decided to actually give you some, so I spent quite a bit of time writing what I felt was honest and accurate, and maybe even entertaining. I was surprised by your judgmental words when you said, "If you'd think for a second instead of just jerking off..."

I can't be certain if you were replying to my comment, but you might be suggesting that I didn't appreciate the depth and nuance of the dialog written for Lara and Jonah because I didn't take a moment to think before I jerked off. Was something happening between the lines which I failed to notice that would have clarified why Jonah actually uses condoms when he's Imagining(!) having sex with Lara? Would it simultaneously explain why he imagines getting her pregnant? Does Jonah know Pregnancy is far less likely when using a condom? It's Especially unlikely if you use a condom during a Fantasy(!).

Anyway, it's a strange way to speak to someone who took the time to watch what you created and then offered some feedback. You can never really know what you inspired someone to do through your imagery and writing, but it certainly seems quite clear you intended(!) to inspire Arousal. It certainly isn't reasonable of you to be judgy, or to act like you're disgusted by people who feel a certain way for a certain reason. I was confused to read that you don't approve of viewers jerking off unless they/we had been inspired by your storytelling; not just the imagery. Honestly, I'd prefer that too, but it's harder as I/we get older to become aroused from a sexy story uncoupled from any visual stimuli.

Take care, and I'll look forward to your response and your next story.

HanSoloDX,My video was made using the Sandbox mode from the game Wild Life by Adeptus Steve. The characters and visuals follow the game’s style — this is about as close as I can get, so please understand.

Bro below needs to touch grass

Its literally a dream sequence numnuts

Twisted and out of the ordinary. Unexpected and full of surprises. Excellent stuff.

You already messed up on the easiest part — the title. I’m not gonna sit here and spell out every event just so everyone ‘gets it.’ Think for yourself a little. Dreams and imagination are one-sided anyway, of course the words are gonna come out biased. I don’t even need to write a story if all you’re planning to do is jerk off.

All the scenes are just Jonah’s imagination, he made it all up. And yeah, I’m not writing it like every other story where every girl just gives in to a black guy so easily. I write my women as smart, not dumb. If you’d think for a second instead of just jerking off, you’d realize he was imagining it from the moment he walked in and saw her chest.

And yeah, I made it like she’s left hanging, kinda giving in — you know, the kinda stuff you guys are into

I was going to write a comment questioning why Lara is speaking so rudely to Jonah the entire time, and even threatening to blow his dick off. But something got me even more flustered than her unpleasantness. Hear me out...

They go through an entire box of condoms, and then we hear Lara say, "We don't need them anymore." What could she possibly mean by that? It's a bizarre thing for a woman to say after requiring a man to use an entire box of condoms in one session.
Then we hear an even crazier line of dialog when Jonah says, "Let's get you pregnant!" That has to be the craziest thing a man could possibly say after having just used an entire box of condoms in a single session. What kind of incoherent writer could have possibly thought that line of dialog made any sense? If Jonah wanted to get her pregnant, why the hell is he using protection? WHYWHYWHY?!?! And why is he throwing it out there like it's just a thing to do? Has a man EVER said such a thing before?

I apologize if I seem a little overly critical, but you spent a lot of time creating this, so I feel you need to understand how bad the whole thing looks when you can't even put a single sentence together, but for some reason, you insist on writing a whole terrible script anyway.

Whatever. Keep up the good work, and stop doing the bad work.

The writing gets Zero stars, but the animation gets 4.5 out of 5.

Lara cant resist BBC

If you enjoy the story I’m telling, feel free to drop a comment! And if you don’t, I’m cool with feedback too ????✌️

Why is Lara immediately creeped out and speaking to him rudely while giving him that look, and then immediately overwhelmed by curiosity to find out if the rumor about Sudanese Men could be true? Wouldn't Lara need to inspect all Sudanese Men's penises to confirm a rumor like that, but only after establishing what exactly the rumor is claiming, and how to know if someone is Sudanese with certainty?

Doesn't look like Lara at all. Maybe next time just use the model that already exists.

This is really good.