FAMILY SIN PART- II

The writing in this is SO(!) bad, I can't articulate just how painful it was listening to the first minute. To the creator: Don't write dialog until you've read a few more books, or had a few conversations with a real person. Are these characters speaking in a way that is remotely close to how people really talk? How does your own writing sound to your ears when you play it back? Do you think it sounds fine? Or does it make you wince?

The best way to become a better writer is by Reading. You don't become a better writer just by doing it more and more. That's how we improve things that require muscle memory, but Writing doesn't count as a physical skill. It's an Intellectual exercise. Well, it should be.

I cant take this seriously with the indian dude lmao