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This is a great start for a first pmv, good song choice too! Keep making more and learning! Here are some tips going forward: 1. Short pmvs are nice, but when you get your workflow figured out and have more practice, try to go for 5+ minute songs. Would love to see this edit be a little longer! (especially that peen sway clip at (0:20).) 2. Your clip-switching could be slowed down a tad (0:14), try and focus on showing clips that have radically different poses for a longer time per clip. The goal is to make it easier for the viewer to quickly adjust to changes in scene while maintaining the fast pace, which is a lot easier to do when the poses between clips are more similar, or they have a similar focal point. Similar poses can be switched between quickly with less eye lag for the viewer. 3. Your syncing of the clips motion is good, but syncing could be tightened up a little when you have clips ending, some of them don't quite end on beat. 4. (0:19) You do a little halftime speed here, lean into varying your speed like that in the beginning and breakdown sections of songs. Doing this is better than going into overly fast paces like with the TomiX clip. (0:10) That's it. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you soon!
thanks!!!
1. Short pmvs are nice, but when you get your workflow figured out and have more practice, try to go for 5+ minute songs. Would love to see this edit be a little longer! (especially that peen sway clip at (0:20).)
2. Your clip-switching could be slowed down a tad (0:14), try and focus on showing clips that have radically different poses for a longer time per clip. The goal is to make it easier for the viewer to quickly adjust to changes in scene while maintaining the fast pace, which is a lot easier to do when the poses between clips are more similar, or they have a similar focal point. Similar poses can be switched between quickly with less eye lag for the viewer.
3. Your syncing of the clips motion is good, but syncing could be tightened up a little when you have clips ending, some of them don't quite end on beat.
4. (0:19) You do a little halftime speed here, lean into varying your speed like that in the beginning and breakdown sections of songs. Doing this is better than going into overly fast paces like with the TomiX clip. (0:10)
That's it. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you soon!