Ok all I can see is that odd glitch in the background, also personal taste thing but I’m not really into the VO with some actors you can just tell they are phoning it in while thinking about getting their nails done or that they still need to clean the spare room, then you run across a good one that actually sound like she is enjoying herself and the director is like “just record it she sounds fantastic, I’m hard just listening to her”” well sadly that not the case with this one if it’s a real person you can’t tell as there is no emotion there.