Drift ZZZ Slut HMV

Nice

it started out pretty good, but after the hmv started it just got really weak and destroyed all the atmosphere you created at the beginning, to improve the 28 seconds of the beginning I would have used masking to insert the characters instead of dry cuts, they would enter the scene with more fluidity, after the 28 seconds where it got really weak I would recommend you learn to improve your transitions, use more of the editing resources.

also learn how to deal with the black bars that are left over in some videos

5/10