Study Break - A Stopu42 PMV

nah

there's nothing really bad in your hmv, but nothing that makes it really good, if you're going to work using only one video you need to compensate with heavy and creative editing, there was none of that in this work, it was very simple, also pay more attention to the thumb, it's what draws attention to click on your video, also try to deal in more creative ways with the black borders than just making the video blurry in the background