Jane Doe and Zhu Yuan

Yeah great animation. Can't really add much to this. The comment below me is pretty much on point, Thanks for this tho.

Good music choice, good clips. 0 editing minus plain transitions. Sync up your clips with the music, make the transitions nicer (jump cuts, music synced, basic visual effects can all enhance this), and with a bit of effort above bare minimum, you'd have a decent vid.

Like, your taste is good, but your effort (or knowledge) is minimal.