D.VA X BBC

Thanks for the disclaimer in the description. The quality of this site is plummeting since certain people feel the need to intentionally dislike a video simply because they hate the genre and not on account of the artistic skill behind it.

Nice one, love a longer video with some plot

these girls need to be fucked and filled til they look like there gonna burst , and how bout more than 1 guy filling them

Well after watch it, it's time to let my very humble opninion:

It's a very good video, but you need to work in the plot developing, I know make a very long plot obviously will make the video longer but make one porn scene after another just with some short subtitles isn't the best form of handle the plot neither.

for example if you want to enhance the plot management of this video in particular you can start with diva talking with the professor, the porn scene start and after the fist porn scene finish the screen go to black and "At the next day" appear followed of D.VA lossing another exam and that lose take her to another porn scene with her professor, you can continue like that making not only making the porn scenes advance but also the time together with the scenes and the growing corruption in the FMC (D.VA in this case) have a more natural and organic form.

The boyfriend presence it's very important for a good NTR too, the FMC saying she have a boyfriend it's a good start but if he can appear and show his existence it's better but you no need add a male character obligatory, you can for example add a moment that she write him in her phone, in a porn scene or out of it in a norma scene in her house or somthing like that.

The male moan I know some people can result them disgusting but another people like me like the moan of the woman and the man in a porn video (More in a Hentai/3d work to give it more realism) so to please both type of public you can make 2 versions, with male and without male moans.

For your patreon I have a good idea too, you can make 3 things to please all people:

1) make a trailer of your next work (1 or 2 min maximum of video depending if the endure of the final work can be less but no less of 30 seconds of trailer please) to make the poeple hipe for the next work.

2) Make a Subscribestar account (Some people don't use Patreon and Patreon sometimes behaves some... "bad" (for be gentle) with the creators too...) that will help you to reach more public for your works.

3) Make ALL your works free but upload them 1 or 2 weeks befor to your Patreon (And your Subscribestar account if you make one) for the people that decide to support you and make in the end of EVERY VIDEO a "credit" segment with the people nicks that are supporting you (If you make a level system with different prices the "Credits" part must be with the different levels of prices and the time distance between uploads of your works must be different for example if you make 2 leves asking 5 dolars and 10 dolars the 10 dolars version must be uploaded first, the 5 dolars version must be uploaded 1 week after and the free version must be uploaded 1 week after the 5 dolars version and 2 weeks after the 10 dolars version, a better example, if you upload a new work today and have this system of leves, today you upload the 10 dolars version, the 5 volars version must uploaded the 10/14 and the free version must be uploaded the 10/21)

all this I recomend you it's to be more professional and help you to improve but you don't need to follow anithing that I said.