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(Warning: BNWO, Forced) Sibling Time: CGW Part 2 / WIld Life Commissions
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A continuation to "Cuckolding Goes Wrong".
What happens when your old coworker doesn´t think taking your GF is enough?
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What happens when your old coworker doesn´t think taking your GF is enough?
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I think the problem with this piece is partly the lighting and clarity from a technical perspective. Usually, the graphics in your videos are captivating, not so much here. The story had twists - sisters go from being abducted and forced into submission and incest. However, it seemed to move slow. We didn't have the usual buildup to a pinnacle moment... possibly the music is too sedate.
I DID NOT think the audio or lines were terrible as bmagada says. I like the smooth, understated voice narrating the situation and talking to siblings... the dirtier the better, actually. For those who cannot figure out you concentrate on cuck and interracial stuff, they are not paying attention to the road. I wasn't big into your commissioned tentacle story with the blue elf girl, yet some like tentacle sex.
I like the character introductions at the beginning. Texting and phone messages enhance the validity. The spanking was fantastic. Forced voyeurism was fab. Female voices are superb.
I like how you've moved to oral dialogue over visual text.
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I may not be a fan of some other works but it is because i can get around aliens or animals that much. but this one is just not it.
Bring back the titles because that rythm is horrendous and we get so easily bored and turn off mid video. Unless you animate a lot more, subtitles helped the story going and maintained a good rythm. The woman started to get corrupted we got it in subtitiles, time passing we got in titles, we were actually living the story.
If people don't want to read, then they don't have to. They can just appreciate the voiceover and the animation because you do that too. Bring back the scribes meanwhile you try to max your animations, voiceover and boom you'll get the product who gets people addicted. We were already addicted before voice over, don't ruin everything now.
For what i've seen, you are far from winning against best creators out there in terms of animation for now. Focus on making the video addictive, while you improve. Bring back the damn titles ! (and keep doing great real, although i don't think much people care, i do lol)
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