F1-FULL - Pain and Pleasure [ENG-Sub]

The animation did what it was supposed to do. Here's my critique:

The story is ambitious. Not one thing makes any sense at all, but that's not too important. I don't understand how you wrote so much dialog and never felt that checking your spelling was very important. Did you even proofread the script, or look it over even once before you finalized the video? The characters all spoke total nonsense and at such an unnatural speed. You couldn't have thought it sounded good.

I would encourage you if I felt this was a good use of anyone's time. Good luck.

The narration could use some smoothing out.

This is great! Please continue to make them. May I ask what animation packs were used in the pole whipping / punching scenes?