Dark Days/PMV

Dont put your own watermark on this, it's bad taste. You are user other people's content (which already has watermarks in some cases) and didn't animate anything. You're just editing the clips together.

The "Pulse" effect where there is an after image of green red and blue is starting to get overused to high hell in MV's (especially on this site). Many editors use it as a crutch so that they don't have to bother with actually synching the clips themselves. You on the other hand have a pretty solid grip on synching and timing for clips, but constantly having that pulse is distracting from it. You've got the making to be better than most, so try and stand out by not doing the same thing everyone else is.