Kuro of a Hundred Plans - Sox Piece ep 13 [One Piece]

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I'm going to try and offer some constructive feedback that I genuinely think will be helpful and make the videos you post here more popular.

Here goes: Stop posting entire episodes of your series and instead just cut out the sex scenes and post them as stand alone one shots. By doing this you'll be focusing on the *strongest* aspect of your videos - your character models and animation - while cutting out the *weakest* aspect - your contrived storyline and shallow characterization. Rather than a 4-mintue slog to get to the action... it'll be more like a highlight reel and will allow the viewer to skip your horribly contrived and lackluster storyline and focus on the One Piece sex action that actually brought them to the One Piece section of this site for sex videos.

Your character models are actually really good and I can tell that effort was put into rendering them. But your story reads like the worst kind of crack fic. A crack fanfic relies entirely on the reader's goodwill for the original series because the author's portrayal of the characters has them acting as hollow, superficial parodies of themselves for the sake of lowbrow humor and they are otherwise robbed of the charm and likability that made them such iconic and endearing characters in the first place. It's because of that awful characterization that people are *actively choosing* NOT TO watch your videos.

Let's look at some evidence: All the videos posted in the One Piece category after this one have more views. Including that 10-second Yamato video. Your Nami-centric videos are the most popular ones in your series but that's more on account of NAMI'S sex appeal than anything you did. Because look at those four 40-second videos of Nami being done from behind. There's no context, or story, or characterization there... just Nami getting railed. Compare them to your episode 12 and the first three all have more views, likes, and comments while the most recent fourth one that came out two weeks after your episode 12 has significantly more likes and is about even in terms of views. That tells me people would prefer to watch a short video with *NO* story over a much longer one with a bad story.

Instead of portraying Nami - one of the smartest, shrewdest, most resourceful, and most untrusting characters in the series and turning her into a pathetic dumb whore who gets outsmarted by a moron like Buchi... you could instead skip over that character assassination and focus on the good part of Nami getting fucked by Buchi. Granted, Buchi has like ZERO sex appeal but I genuinely think a short minute-long videos focusing only on the sex action with NO CONTEXT whatsoever will end up being more popular than the full episodes.

Posting your full episodes here has probably gotten you an extra 1 or 2 dozen patrons... but that's really about as far as your writing skills are going to take you. But if you post shorter videos that focus on your artistic skills and highlight your character models and animation... I think you'll be A LOT more successful.