Cotton's Casino Fun~!!

I'm not really a fan of the voice in this video darling. It's too quiet and the emphasis is not on the right syllables of the words. The tone is wrong. It doesn't match the character or the moaning, whoever did that does not sound like the same person. Now, a quiet voice is okay. Because ironically when the volume and energy is balanced enough to hear it without needing your volume at max, it can be extremely good.
For one, when you say "show" it's like deflated and depressed, when it should be a more inquisitive and excited tone with more energy. It sets the tone for the audience like it isn't going to excite them and have them begging for more. I just feel no personality from this flat voice work. I know you can do better.
Frankly, Idon't like critics. They tend to be far too harsh and negative for no reason other than to be that way, and they rub me the wrong way. And I hate to be one here. But if it will help you, then I'll leave a comment with my honest thoughts in hopes it has a positive impact. If you wanna improve, you could look at this as constructive criticism and grow and improve, or look at it as me just being a hater. Believe me. People can and will be far harsher. That isn't what I'm here to be.
I'll say this darling. I don't enjoy wasting my energy. Your voice has potential. You just need to bring it out and try without feeling scared to fail or that people won't like it. It's holding you back.
A good Ero VA can turn someone on without even needing a visual image. That just makes it work better.
Cheers, and have a wonderful day.

Whoever voiced this is clearly a dude