Obsession: A Dogfucker PMV

Damn music ruins this video.

This would be so much better if you kept the audio from the vids that have em. In my opinion, a good hmv has two things. 1) The animations moving to the beat. 2) retaining some of the sex audio in the clips. The music should be in the forefront with the sex sounds still audible in the background.

what artist made very first vid can't seem to find them

thats my wet dream

For a PMV, it's really slow paced. The music isn't synced with the clips at all, nor are the clips organized in a thematic manner (by character, position or speed). It's basically just a basic compilation with some music in the background.
I know this is your first try and that's why I'm giving you feedback, don't take this the wrong way.