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The choice of scenes, in-scene editing, transitions, and compound shots are magical, and compliment the music so well. I could do without the JOI, but I think you were right to break up the sequences with a rest, perhaps something other than a straight cut to a black screen? I also think you could have compounded more than two scenes together, and the Ayane shot takes too long to come up in brightness: by the time I get to see it, I'm far more interested in Mercy. The Nyotengu scene transition is brilliant--pushing the other two away with its symmetrical, vertical composition. I don't know why you show the Idemi shot, then cut back to Nyo--it's jarring to have a straight cut and moreso for it to go forth and back; if what you are doing is cutting up the timelines, then have it as a motif throughout or don't at all. The Juri finish was a great switch up of tone, but you'd shown a climax already, so either run a few of them as an outro, or keep to having one. I think you could have accomplished a lot more if you'd made your own extended version of the song. Up to 1:10 is absolutely perfect--I could get lost in that for hours. That's enough autism from me; you have raw talent!

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