2B looses to Big Bad Werewolf [Lizard3469]

1. Should I keep the dialogue during sex?
Sure, maybe look into using Text to speech and AI voice software.
2. Should I keep intro and outro "story" parts or would it be better to go straight to sex scenes?
Plot isn't bad and can enhance a video.
3. Is the length of the video good ? If not would it be better if it was shorter or longer?
The length is fine for the story as the scene transitions and low is good. As for shorter or longer I think it depends on the kind of video you want to make.
4. Should I add more angles? Shots from one angle should be longer or shorter?
The variety of angles is fine and the transition between them in this video feels fine as well. Possibly add more positions in the future or a better flow between them.
5. Any advices or suggestions?
I'd say keep up the good work. Possibly expand the monster selection like Chaurus, Lurkers, and maybe even a bull netch. As well as juggle the race of woman to include red guards, orcs, and elves.

I hope you can add more pictures of the genital finger.

The dialog can be distracting I'm fine with everything else.

I like what you're doing now. This video is great.

1. Should I keep the dialogue during sex ? YES
2. Should I keep intro and outro "story" parts or would it be better to go straight to sex scenes ? I like the story
3. Is the lenght of the video good ? If not would it be better if it was shorter or longer ? longer
4. Should I add more angles ? Shots from one angle should be longer or shorter ? Looks great
5. Any advices or suggestions ? Maybe more Knot... little more vocal

1.Yes! Even if some of the lines are silly, it helps really well. Be sure to do the spell check review!
2. Small setup are fine. Don't be lazy because it is small! Makes mood feel silly.
3. Yes! Too many to make 1-5 minute videos. 8-13 (even 16-18!) is perfect!
4. The shots length is fine. I like to see more pov at least more faces. It can be hard when the model is bad or looks silly from an angle, but as long as you have head in same shot it's fine!
5. Nice small setups
https://rule34video.com/videos/3093518/love-in-battle/
https://rule34video.com/videos/3069557/horny-argonian-and-her-pet-troll/
5. Good at using pov to look at faces
https://d3gz42uwgl1r1y.cloudfront.net/ca/cavafly01/submission/2016/10/eaaa3a1dfa22617cfa9011195f676568.webm
https://static1.e621.net/data/09/d2/09d2ec0f94d2d9b864e140a1eafde4ae.webm
5. Wish the 5:11 shots had this! 1:50 2:58 4:10 is great! The 4:10 edge teasing shots are also nice! 5:11 feels frame cutoff. Tilt up a little!

The intro and dialogue were great, longer videos would make it even better

I Very much like longer vídeos with history/dialogue