I wish she had pubic hair. No pubic hair makes it look like you were going for that subliminal *implied* pre-teen look. He should have given her a vaginal creampie. Also he could have removed his pants and shirt but kept his mask on and still retained his anonymity. Finally, at the end, she could have looked up at him and said something like, "I'm thinking of getting pizza again next week," her meaning, and invitation, clear. But overall not a bad beginning. 4 out of 5 stars. Thanks for posting.
Looks like "pizza" is the new "coffee" for nowadays...Mary Jane, Jessie Raspberry, Ghost Spider, Black Cat, Tifa Lockheart...and note all imitated by horny lonely women...