Mimp_The Slip - Pakmamo22

It's not bad, it's pretty amazing and very hot! Please keep at it, I really enjoyed it! Please do not undersell yourself, the facial expressions and details you made made it very exciting. I love how they lift the stool they use when being pleasured from behind, and the hearts that flash in their eyes. Its so fun!

For a first try, its really good! Some of the graphics are simple and the animation's a bit stiff, but you've got it down. Keep it up!

I tried to add some more insight to things with my last comment, but for some reason it's all gone. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I'll add a little now and hopefully it goes through. The camera was the last thing I did, so I may have rushed it. The timing of things were way off in most palces, I should have done more test renders to make certain timing was actually good (such as camera movements or the walk). I'm looking at remaking my character using simpler methods and doing more things manually, since it seems having dynamic things may not actually save time. I also just want more overall quality. Thanks again for all the feedback, so far it's just been encouragement which I wasn't entirely expecting since I was very close to not even releasing this, as I wasn't very proud of the end result.

that's a good start, carry on !

I can already hope to expect great things for this channel. I'm impressed. Great work!

Apreciate all the feedback!

I really liked it too

I wish this site would let me subscribe to you! This is an incredibly good first attempt (already better than many of the animations on one of the paysites I subscribe to) and you obviously will only get better and become one of the real greats! I hope I don't lose you in the process!!

It is pretty good for a first animation like that. Keep up the work! You seem really promising. Granted, there is a lot of work to be done, as explained by a dude below. If I were to add something, that would be smoother camera movement, don't abruptly stop it like at 0:19 and 0:39. Walking animation needs work. Character model's butt is too small and angle-y. When he sits on the dildo his ass looks like there's a bone in it. Also general movements need smoothening. Other than that, keep trying and learning! You definitely have a lot of potential compared to most new animators!

For a first attempt, this is incredibly ambitious, and I don't mean that as a bad thing. You've got changing expressions and a moving camera, which is more than most would try at the outset. I can see secondary animation for the hair and for the junk swaying back and forth, and you remembered to make the character blink consistently. On top of that, this character is thinking and reacting to stimuli in the environment, instead of being a lifeless doll, and you're trying to tell a bit of a story in this piece. Those elements are building blocks to a fantastic animation.
For what you're trying to do, the model is totally fine.
The walk cycle was on the stiff side, and the motion between poses was a bit slow and robotic, but both of those can be fixed with a bit more ease in and ease out and the implementation of animation arcs.
I can tell you have a head for refinement, and with this being your first, there's a ton of obvious promise here.
Just keep tinkering, try to incorporate the 12 principles of animation, and I can only see you improving.

Yo as your first animation is incredibly good! I liked it a lot! Great work!